First Chapter Reworked

Jane and I finished reworking the first chapter today. We felt our main character was too passive so we beefed up the story and made it more exciting. 

I had my daughter read the new version plus the prologue. She really liked them! She had only read one of the first drafts of the manuscript –before the story was halfway done.

Today she said, “This is much better.” 

That made me smile.

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